I Liked it
I wish we still had the "Humor" Violence" Ratings on here so I could explain why I gave you a 6... I'm not going to say anything about the graphics, They weren't great, but they were okay. The main thing was the plot... I mean, It was a story, and it was one with a happy ending (Which you never see here) But it wasnt one of those things that made me go "Ahahaha" Or "Oh my god Will he make it!" You know? Still, it was pretty good. Also something that would probabaly take 5 seconds and make it alot better is the music at the end needs to fade out instead of just ending, It makes it look x1000 more professional. Keep them coming!
That was pretty good
If I had to change anything, it would to make the beginning a little shorter, People on here have attention spans of about 14 seconds... And I'm sure alot of people got pissed off and clicked X (I almost did) I'm glad I waited though
Needs to be longer, maybe the length of the song?
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